Magical 1

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  • An escape from reality.


    I sauntered forlorn, out of my mind,
    In an ever loathsome park;
    Trees erratically grown and escalated,
    In foliage of filth ashes.
    It was a place absconded, never hugged.
    With a mind-numbing fog.
    Then I glimpsed an iridescently feathered;
    Circling within my radius of vision,
    And that it cheers the worn forest.
    Swiftly, it perished in my sight,
    So I intoxicatingly paced and scurried around,
    Then the clouds cried along with my feeling,
    Watering the dusts in the trees,
    And giving that delight to surge.
    The rain already wrapped up,
    And disappointment did not came to bother,
    As the sun peeped and spread its hands,
    To crash its blaze to the drizzles left,
    That is enough to illuminate the greens,
    And unhook their veiled beauty.
    The light came to intensify,
    Bestowing its spanking new photograph,
    In this world of repugnance.
    “What a place!” I screamed,
    Several echoes arose.
    But it seemed to be a familiar voice,
    It was my friends who replied.
    Then I realized I was just in my dream.

    The above photo was taken at the back of our school. The park has a lagoon inhabited by fishes. Number of trees are around, from mahoganies to bamboos and some trees with falling orange blossoms. With its tranquility you can only hear the chirps of local birds. With its beauty, you can see gamut of butterflies flying around. Now, this is what we call P-A-R-A-D-I-S-E!

    22 comments:

    H A R R Y G O A Z said...

    Suuuuuuuuuuper blog!

    Debbie Smith said...

    WOW!
    Have a fabulous weekend!
    Debbie's Travels

    Vhincci Subia said...

    Thank you Harry... :)

    Vhincci Subia said...

    Have a fabulous weekend too Debbie! :)

    LV said...

    That is definitely a paradise created by nature. Very nice. Are those your words of wisdom or someone elses? You are thinker for being so young.

    Vhincci Subia said...

    Actually, I wrote this piece 2 years ago... Just found it on my documents recently so I posted it with the photo... Thank you LV! :)

    Kim, USA said...

    This looks like a fairy could roam this place freely. It's very peaceful.

    Vhincci Subia said...

    Absolutely Manang Kim... This place is awesome... uplifting! :)

    One Fly said...

    Intense green you have here Vhincci!

    Vhincci Subia said...

    Right One Fly! Though it was crafted, still, the place is wonderful...

    emmanuelmateo said...

    soo magical talaga ang place..so green and very refreshing..

    Personal Blog of Ayuni Rianthy said...

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    Vhincci Subia said...

    Thanks Emman for dropping by... :)

    Vhincci Subia said...

    Ayuni, :)
    That's so sweet of you...

    ardiands said...

    nice post..i like it.

    Vhincci Subia said...

    Thank you Ardiands... :)

    robkaskaian said...

    That park should be meticulously maintained everyday. Lagyan din ng goose, turtle, koi fish, etc.. more magical, isn't it?

    Vhincci Subia said...

    Totally! :) The park is actually under construction... They are also building this butterfly house... Kasi dami talagang butterflies dito... :)

    robkaskaian said...

    Ang daming ganyan dito. Ginawang public parks, mero na ma-maintain everyday. Linilinis.

    Vhincci Subia said...

    Yan ang maganda jan, maraming magandang views... ung mga park, at iba pang sites, linilinis... may maintenance na tinatawag... dito, ewan ko lang...

    Rajlakshmi said...

    thats a beautiful capture

    Vhincci Subia said...

    Thank you Rajlakshmi! :)

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