I rested on my nest soporifically,
And never veered for something else.
Tatty feathers were scattered,
But they didn’t cause to bother.
The next thing I can remember,
Was the sun stroking radiance on my face.
“Holy crap,” I tweeted,
And I immediately stood up.
Still dizzy, still weak,
To start a new day of challenges.
Now I realized, crows weren’t that effective;
That I woke up indolently, after the light sets in.
Now, I dismantled again the tradition,
“The early bird catches the worm.”
I left my scruffy nest;
I forced myself to move.
My wings were paralyzed;
And that convinced me to walk.
I reached the park I always passed everyday,
Still the same as yesterday.
But this time, I felt my soul being shattered.
My heartbeat raced with my breath.
My body lost some balance,
My sensation was being played.
Then, inspiringly, the sun intensified;
Its tentacles touched every single leaf.
Meritoriously, I was relieved.
As this lifeless moment turned to such enlightenment.
The above photo was also taken at the park behind our school. The place is definitely a heaven. I really love the trees when the sun illuminates the leaves and the cool wind tickles them. Indeed, refreshing!
11 comments:
Awesome! I LOVE the picture and the accompanying poem. My favorite line is:
"My wings were paralyzed;
And that convinced me to walk."
Another wonderful sharing of nature.
Also, some more of your thoughts and words that are definitely very good. You should be a writer.
Thank you Elisa! A comment from a writer? Wow! Really appreciate it.
Actually, I don't know if that was a poem, if it sounds good or what... just had the courage to post it... Lol!
Thank you for the kind words LV!
Writer? I wanted to be a good one. :)
How interesting! Thank you for stopping by and leaving a very supportive comment!
soo green..love it!!keep it up bro.
Thank you Shanae & Emman... :)
Nasilaw ako sa sobrang greenish.
di ko talaga forte ang ganyang writings vhince. booooo ako. hahaha.
Kung makapagsalita naman itong si Rob... :) Haha!
EXCELLENT !!! Following.
Hmmmm... thanks! :)
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